Rebirth

Don't it's too facile, too ordinary 

Rilke said.

In my quest of individuality

In my probe towards perfection 

I abstained.

But tonight,

Tonight I confess to the blank 

That, in you, my whole sank.

Tonight I mourn

The girl,

The forlorn being

That I have been

Before you have touched my wretchedness 

Caressed my bare body

A woman, I have become

Into being, I have finally willed.

I was set ablaze

And then born anew 

A child of a filthy scene.

Reviews

[The Immortal Phoenix]

The title caught my eye because that is what I am all about. But the words themselfs? they totally deserve the title that they were given. I like the last line "A Child of a filthy scene" the best

[-Batata]

Oh thank you ❤

[Paul Bell]

Like the way, you paint this picture.
Set ablaze then born anew.
A child of a filthy scene.
Doesn't get any better than that.

[-Batata]

Oh I'm glad you liked it, thank you for your review ❤