So Free

Running around in this world so free

just me and the one i love, my hubby

kissing and touching as much as we please

not doing wrong cause were meant to be

breathless when he strokes my hair

speechless to the feels unaware

love is there we both know its true

and some day i hope we say I do.

 

To J.R. My future Hubby.

 

Reviews

[KUFU]

Awww, a love poem.
Your young. I didn't realize you were 14. Well, not to dash yer hopes or anything; puppy love is great, but everlasting? Most likely not. Naivet� plays the leading role in puppy-love. Enjoy the moment of it...there's nothing wrong with that.
The most likely reality: 'love' will have ya'll screwin like rabbits, J.R. will be unable to control his libido, "Becky" comes along and offers her "innocence"...by this time yer preggers, J.R. won't be able to handle the "pressure" and bolts, your now topping out at 210 wearing a size 14/16 because of depression, you'll see J.R. an "Becky" at the local Stop-n-Shop kissing and become even more depressed, you'll go home to a crying baby and spend your evening crying on the couch poppin Bon-Bons that you picked up at the Stop-n-Shop where you saw your puppy-love and his beautiful fianc�. This is just one possibility. Or it could go like this...
You and J.R. really love each other and my previous scenario is just a portrait of the unfortunate many teens who wind up messed up because of a beautiful loss of "innocence".
The poem was a touching ode though, just don't get pregnant confusing normal teenage lust with love. When I was a teenager I fell in "love" so many times I lost count...but god-damn did I have fun falling "in-love!!"
Sex is indeed very liberating!!