Goodbye

Goodbye

A Poem by Tania

I was in the sky.
I was moving heroically and smoothly
through the clouds which
majestically danced with me.
They lifted my arm slowly and dragged
me to a place  where the birds whispered
the songs of safety among the beautiful wind
which trapped me  in an era of restfulness.
A feeling indescribable to a human ,
I was doing what was dreamt to be done.
The sky has  become my home.
I wondered
How could I listen to myself speak ?
I was unconsciously  drifting in the spacious atmosphere.
How could I feel all of these things?
Feeling my heart beating profoundly ,
my blood slowly moving  through my body ,
enduring the beauty of silence.
Was I alone ?
I could hear laughter, and even crying .
It was a mixture of two contradicting emotions
which lifted my soul further away from my presence.
Oh this song ...
I know this beautiful song which keeps
on diverting in my mind .
I love the piano ,
every note played was drifting  me
away from the place I rested .
I was slowly reaching the stars ,
I could see the light
that enlightened my thoughts.
I was amused by the beauty of this world.
Never would I have ever known
that stars spoke.
They have always.

It slowly became dark ,
my feelings were no longer recognized.
I was moving away from my world.
I was far away from it all.
Am I saying goodbye?
No ,
please don't cry .
I can hear you
I love you ,
I do.
For my mind is not understanding why ,
but my heart pleads for your hand
so you can smile.
Forgive me
I have to go ,
I don't know why exactly  ,
but I have  never felt more alive.

All I am
All I ever was
is pleading to let go.
Goodbye laughter,
goodbye love,
goodbye music.
Goodbye my world ,
my beautiful astounding world
which has miraculously made me
breathe the essence of beauty.
I will meet you  again,
someday 
I hope.








© 2015 Tania



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Tania
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You have a gift with words. It isn't often I see such gorgeous imagery portrayed so effortlessly. I was drawn in and held in place with stunned admiration of your fantasy.

The emotions in this are palpable, relatable, and deep, yet not overly indulgent.

I am absolutely blown away. This is the best piece of poetry I have seen in quite a while.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

oh wow ! I am extremely happy that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you very much :)
I really enjoyed reading this. You took me there with every visual and emotion(: Beautifully done

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tania

2 Years Ago

Thank-you Lluvs, I am so glad to hear that you enjoyed it :)
Lluvs

2 Years Ago

You are welcome (:
Just a beautiful poem. I don't have words to describe it. Defiantly one of your best!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tania

2 Years Ago

Oh wow, thank you I appreciate it . I am so glad you enjoyed it ...:)
An outstanding write about your astounding place in the sky where the essence of peace and beauty reside. Wonderful...:)......

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tania

2 Years Ago

Wow , thank-you. Your words are deeply appreciated :)
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly...:).......
This is sad yet beautiful. the goodbye makes me sad but the words make is fluid. your vocabulary is amazing. A poem well expressed :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tania

2 Years Ago

Thanks Nazia, glad you enjoyed it :D
This is a great write that provides great visuals.
"They lifted my arm slowly and dragged
me to a place where the birds whispered
the songs of safety among the beautiful wind
which trapped me in an era of restfulness."
You describe a beautiful peaceful place :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tania

2 Years Ago

Thank-youuuu

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Tania
Tania

Menton, Beirut, France



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