Everything Left Of You.

Everything Left Of You.

A Poem by Devyani
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Yes, just four lines.

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No, it doesn't work that way,
I wish it did, I truly do,
But sometimes people walk away
With everything left of you.

© 2011 Devyani



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Devyani, your words reverberating the very essence of wisdom. Simplicity and elegance compliment and complete each other and so you have proven with panache. Sometimes people walk away and all that is left is memories, all that is left is a piece of you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


But sometimes people walk away
With everything left of you.
I loved those lines, very bright pic. you made in my mind about the life by droppping this short poem. Title good as well and pervasively suited on your words. An Incredible job again with an excellent work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


That was very very honest and raw. Short, but still very deep and profound!

Posted 5 Years Ago


brings to mind the pain we feel when someone to whom we gave everything to has walked out on us and left us with nothing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


4 lines with a spot on impact. *applause*

Posted 6 Years Ago


If you can convey the feeling well enough in four lines, then its enough. And you did an excellent job with it. Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This was short and I usually don't like short poems because it's hard to convey a meaning but yours did. Thus, I loved it. It was very strong with your words. I enjoyed it. So kudos. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Short, but strong. There is so much meaning in between the lines and holds its self together strongly. Great job1

Posted 6 Years Ago


A short and strong poem. You made your point in four lines. Sometime we are left to re-set a life after all is lost. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet. What a beauty.
100 (+1)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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