Clouds

Not very good when it comes to poems xP

Clouds

They drift aimlessly in the sky

Coating the land and claiming it as their own

Not letting the sun fingers infiltrate and bake the world dry

But also not letting humans see the secrets of the universe

What are they hiding?

Sometimes claiming the shapes of others

Hypnotizing our minds as a show of the Heavens commences

Emotions are blunders as showing grey, fuchsia, amber and crisp white

A colorful display of past affections from the souls of our loved ones

Always aimlessly drifting in the sky

Coating the land and claiming it as their own

Just what really are clouds....

Reviews

[DOROTHY]

well done my friend
i luv to watch all those clouds taking shapes, it's amazing
you wrote this well hun

[Lydia Shutter]

Brilliant personification of clouds in this well written poem. Beautifully written and presented! Lydi**

[Alexander B. Kerri]

I assume clouds are mystical beings who do not notice the way out of this earth, they rotate over and over and never having to give up is their priority. So essentially, they assume the daily lands they trail are absolute and pure lands they have never ventured. It is a journey to search for the kingdom of stars, a place named 'Home'.

[Blissful Sin]

Wow, I have never thought of it that way... That is true beauty!

-Wondering Bliss

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I just saw this poem. Awesome...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Blissful Sin]

Well thank you for visiting!
-Cheerful Bliss

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[The dark story]

Wow…I really liked your theme here and the way you had penned it. The vivid imageries really works out well. The diction was perfect enough for it. Nice work.

[Blissful Sin]

Thank you very much for reading, Atiba S.
I'm glad you enjoyed.

-Bliss

[Androglossia]

Clouds are visible to the naked eye yet they are untouchable. What are they hiding? The deepest secret of the universe remained untouchable by the human mind. Yet, we know they are there. Just like pain that beclouds a human heart which creates endless questions aimlessly drifting within us. Yet some remained unanswered. You wrote of things larger than life, larger than a mere cloud. You see extraordinary things out of something ordinary just how a writer should be.

[Blissful Sin]

Thank you so much!!

-Bashful Bliss

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome, Bliss:)

[gsbito]

Excellent - makes you really think. I like the line about being a display of past loved ones. No wonder the clouds that inspire me are dark, ominous. Excellent piece Bliss

[Blissful Sin]

Thank you so much!

-Bliss

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

1. It is the beauty of the clouds; an expression of color.

QUOTES

1. "Emotions are blunders as showing grey, fuchsia, amber and crisp white"

This is by far the most inspiring word play that you have expressed in your poetry.

(1) Grey: sombre, melancholy, yet soothing
(2) Fuchia: passion, pleasure, and paint
(3) Amber: natural beauty
(4) White: celestial, content, contemplation.

CONCLUSION

"What are clouds?"

d r e a m s

Lovely work yet again :)

[Blissful Sin]

Thank you for enjoying this piece! I'm not really good at poems, and this is one of my first poems! I thought that it wasn't that poetic or that I didn't put enough of my feelings into it (what am I saying?? LOL). But thanks for the support, it helped me a lot!! x)
-Bliss

[Vria P Crow]

Poetry allows the writer to express emotion much clearer :) I thought you did wonderfully! I first started with short stories :) If you would like something more poetic on my page, I'd recommend Fields of the Moon, The Attic, and Susperia.

[Peter H]

nice write great image people need to learn to appreciate the aesthetics beauty of the world encompassing them :)

[Blissful Sin]

Thanks a ton!!
-Bliss

[Muse]

Not very good you say? Oh sweetie this was inspiring. Your words..the pics...very charming!

[Blissful Sin]

That means a lot for someone like me!! x) Thank You.

-Bliss