The road to a broken heart

Fly a plane to the continent of love at first site.

Land in the country of first date and first kiss.

Go to the city of gifts and sweet words.....

Soon after that you'll be deeply in love.

Find the road of suspicius actions...and

ask for directions to tears at night.

Go to the park of smiles and forgiveness...and

then to the street of dinner at eight.

Follow the map to finding the truth and...

enter the town of anger and despair.

Cross the bridge of how could you do it....and

you've enterd a world of a broken heart.

Reviews

[The Perfectionist]

This is a really cool combination of two journeys we all take, one literal and one figurative. The merging is obvious, but intentionally so, making it seamless. Your English needs a little work, and it has no 'wow' factor (at least for me, Born Dead disagrees), but you've got something good here. Keep it up.

[Catastrophe]

wow, this is simply genius.
Keep on writing, because you can :)