Love

Just a poem about love

Love is deep
Deep like the ocean
It can keep you awake
Or help you go to sleep.

Love is sweet
Sweet like candy
It can be the best feeling ever
Or give you cold feet.

Love is tricky
Tricky like a puzzle
All the pieces can fit together
Or they can be very picky.

Author's Note

Nothing big I dont even know if its good..

Reviews

[Stefanie Holmes]

I really like what you did with this piece! Love can truly be a mix of so many different things. It is quite the journey to be on when we are figuring out all of its mysteries. Sometimes fun mysteries to solve, other times not so much. We are all on this journey of love in life. Beautifully penned poem my friend.

~Stefanie

[Fire Mage Andrea]

It's more than just good. It's excellent.

"Or help you go to sleep" - a parental or guardians love maybe?

[stars are far]

I agree with you..love is everything beautiful in the world, and you can see than if you are hurt from it, since you come to see all the world as a dark one, and like there is nothing left ..even when you smile, which is mostly the best thing, you smile because you are hurt..
well done.. :)
Hope you find love everywhere you go Kat :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your words. Love is tricky and very touchy. Real love is kind and tender. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

I thing it's sounds pretty! This is one of my favorite poems now!