Rapture

Let's just say, no one understands the real story.

A dangerous place; a captivating hideaway,
Packed with truths chewed up and spit out.
Mindfields of dreams that never get dreamt,
No one understands the real story,
You said.
Comprehend sadness,
Touch it and breathe it in.
Enveloping empty space to fill holes
From a past revisited.
A dangerous place; a captivating hideaway,
Deep into dreams you sleep
In the sky, baby's breath
On virgin fingers white and clean.
Patterns of love and life in the spaces between,
Universes collide as the star strikes,
Piercing a blade through your heart.
No one understands the real story,
You said.

Author's Note

An older piece of mine...

Reviews

[Kaleidoscope Apocalypse]

Very nice imagery! Quite an interesting piece, as well.

Keep it up!

[Lani]

That's really good. Great imagery. Very beautiful!

[The Autumn Faerie]

And an absolutely amazing piece it is!

Take care, Alex!
*Ahem*
Birdie, I mean.

[Rachel]

great greek gods of the arts! we've got a talented one! heheh. couldn't help my self, but it is true. Keep on keepin' on. two thumbs way , pretty way up. from me at least.

[Ibex]

Pretty interesting. I don't know what to say about it, I can't see anything wrong with it. Good job, keep up the good work.