Lies Of Serpents

the devil comes in all forms

He was

unfiltered sin

...

slithering

scum sucking

satanic

beast

re-defining

definition of

lowest life form

known to man

...

conniving creature

creating convenient

costumes

cleverly concealing

carnivorous cravings

behind adoring eyes

.

using an

over abundance of

charm & illusions

as his perfect disguise

.

like hunter 

sniffing out

sanctified secretions

lingering from

between my thighs

.

I allowed this

cold blooded killer to

seduce me during

eve-nings

...

watch him

slowly

shed skin without hesitation

...

while lips laced with hallucinogens

effect my concentration

...

predator & prey

writhing amongst

blood laden sheets

internally 

& rhythmically

coaxing

this feeble sheep

to sleep

whispering 

forked tongued lullaby's

the serpent creeps...

Reviews

[themoor]

I like this, the wordplay and plot make for a fast-paced, dark little adventure that satisfies

[InkSlinger]

Dark, and emotional.. yet, paced and control.. almost leaving a taste of resentment. Not sure if your intention was indeed a bibical reference, but love the idea of how the serpent, was the fault of "Eve's" fall..