Pull

Pull

A Poem by Cคɾเภค{♥}

Darkness pull me through

Darkness pull me in

I want to feel your gentle fingers

I want to feel the caress across my skin

My soul is wrapped in sheets

My body is wrapped in passion

Darkness take me gently

Darkness take me now

Before I change my mind

Before I lose control

I want to feel the pain

I want to feel the lust

My heart is throbbing madly

My body beating hungrily

Darkness don't let go

Darkness keep on loving

© 2010 Cคɾเภค{♥}


Author's Note

Cคɾเภค{♥}
Thnaks for the review! whatd do u think? anything i need to change?

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You don't need to change a thing! Your poem is perfect the way it is! It was beautifully written, greatly detailed, and wonderfully descriptive! I loved it! Fantastic job! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


I absulutaly love it. You don't need to change any thing

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 23, 2009
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Cคɾเภค{♥}
Cคɾเภค{♥}

The Heart, CA



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