Play me

Just words.

                 You

I lived and died in your love.

You were my sweetest nights and loneliness days.

I would do it again, even knowing the ending.

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                 Play me

Your hands upon my wanting skin,

gentle and soft,

your touch make me come alive.

You make me want to live and die in your arms.

You are my salvation and you are my greatest sin.

Please play me my dear love.

I will sing a song of your beauty till my last breathe.

                             John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful words of love, deep love. You are my salvation and you are my greatest sin. So much passion in these words Coyote. Thank you.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Chris for reading and the comment. Sometime we need salvation and we need sin.

[Crowley]

Oh yeah...that was as smooth as silk. Great structure and writing, loved it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Crowley. I appreciate the comment.

[Onlyme]

Reading this gave me goosebumps on my skin. Oh.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dee. You are very kind.

[Weeping willow]

Lovely words that flow together so nicely ;-]

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Weeping willow]

Welcome ;-}

[jesserose99]

Love this, talking about the depth of love, how it can be salvation or your greatest sin. Usually a description of the deepest kind of love, tumbling toward you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Jesse and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Einstein Noodle]

so romantic and helpless in love ... its a proverbial bitter sweet mix isn't it Coyote Man? ;(
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes love is my friend and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ........................

[sette]

the emotion, the passion the love ignited had been captured with the words used...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.