My Little Toe

My Little Toe

A Poem by ChrisM
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Brief wondering re sentience.

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Oh little cell

On my little toe,

Are you sentient?

Do you know I’m here?

 

Oh little cell

On my fractured toe,

Do you suffer?

To whom do you pray?

 

© 2012 ChrisM


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ChrisM
Any comments would be most gladly received.

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I can't say I've ever wondered what my little toe is thinking or feeling though I have done it with other parts of my body before. When it was me, however, I didn't quite think so deeply about it either. I tended to just give my arm (or whatever I had happened to hurt) a sort of pep talk.

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a unique perspective. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ChrisM

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I've been carrying the idea for a very long time, and then I fractured the toe - the poem.. read more
This is very interesting. A different perspective of the whole world from the bottom of your foot, up.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 3, 2012
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Tags: toe, sentient, know, pain, pray

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ChrisM
ChrisM

Montreal, Quebec, Canada



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Retired, 62yo woman living with poodle. I was just going to say that I'm frozen as to writing, and then I realized I have frozen shoulder (stuck shoulder muscles, can't lift). That brings to mind that.. more..

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