always

Repetition

Contemplation

Inebriation

Appreciation

Of Life

Author's Note

Forgive me. Mostly it's contemplation with a few rocks on the side.

Reviews

[Michael X]

I love poems that tend to reveal multitude with minimal wording,
and with that, the depth is excellent, fully focused and well layed out.
Beautifully done.

[Don Coorough]

hey, sometimes straight up is called for too!

[Nely Amorim]

short but succinct..lol and so true. thanks for entering my contest;)

[TL Boehm]

oh this one made me smile - I have days when the world would look so much better through a stiff shot of something....

[Gandré]

This is maximal compression in the most strongest meaning on few lines. Adored it! Well stated. Be well, Lara Gandr�

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wo you made a great statement in such few words... yes life may be a bit the same thing day to day but life itself is still a gift we must treasure.

[Tenten]

its swirling in my head, like any moment i'll have an epiphany from these words. its good though, sits and waits.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

Very deep and so few words to relay this message of a swirling cycle.

I like the idea of contemplation on the rocks actually with a splash of lime - leads to some of that inebriation.....

drink of it.

kath

[Anarda Nashai]

So much said in so few words. The brilliant summary of yours is a goal of most poets (even if they won't admit it~lol). Congrats on a job well done....I LOVE IT!!!!

-Anarda Nashai
author of Despondent
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www.anardanashai.webs.com