Loose

Loose

A Poem by Clippedredwings

Please, grab my hand.
...Keep me attached.

Don't let me

                          drift

                                             off.

© 2013 Clippedredwings


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Hmmmmm. Short but sweet. If I were you though, I would add another stanza. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Clippedredwings

10 Years Ago

Thank you; I'll think about it.

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Added on July 30, 2013
Last Updated on July 30, 2013
Tags: grab, my, hand, attached, drift, off, existential, depression, save, me, tired

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Clippedredwings
Clippedredwings

Bloomington, IN



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Hey, guys, I'm a fourteen year-old high school student that writes for the enjoyment of it. It was a great outlet for my emotions during a rough couple of years, so I owe it a lot. more..

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