Cheshire II

Cheshire II

A Chapter by Cloudless

We stare at each other in silence
Him with his catlike smile,
And I, with growing uneasiness 
The only sound being the wind's howling.

"Can I join you up there?"

"Is this your way of tricking me off this ledge?"

"If it is, you can easily drag me down with you."
The smile taming as he holds out his hand,
White scars interweaves his fingers.

When I don't respond, he climbs up beside me.
And I take him with me as I jump off the edge.



© 2017 Cloudless


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It was quite interesting till the second chapter. Started becoming a little confusing from the third. Would be good if you add more descriptions of the characters, situations etc here and there. Good attempt though!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cloudless

6 Years Ago

I see... Thankful for the helpful review. I'll work on it :)
Zoya

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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