Plan #6905

Plan #6905

A Poem by Corset
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Pic from Mata Hari .com

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Save the Yacht 

Did you ever sit cross-legged
on the bed
sideways and waiting?

The verdict of your innermost stones
scraping its way to the light
white hot in pain,

you can turn on the light and the fabric
work is right there
every twist of thread.

We went into the pentagon and let our eyes wander
awhile, young sexy aboriginal,
I might unexpectedly love puff that girl,
it was never even an option,
I can't believe it,
it was not even heavily prayer-ed about
until recently

and they promise me
my streaming angels
that tomorrow is all gonna be better
while I flit like a butterfly
on the winds of change

Two energy organisms
missing each other,
elusive and
mad for Mata Hari,
waist water special
life's a mystery
when you
always feel my puppy tug.

On the way back
from the tunnels that god
may grace,
we discussed my return,

plan #6905
of thousands more
just might get us there
forever a part,
together.









© 2017 Corset



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Read twice, found thoughts that bewildered and fascinated in turn. Your thoughts are near fragile yet fly beyond boundaries. That number.. near impossible to decipher.. perhaps grabbed from a book or the air.. but far far into the future to reach.. but always a goal to go for or laugh at. Perhaps!

Will read again, not necessarily to understand but merely for the sing it sings... and the echoes it leaves.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Corset

4 Months Ago

Thank you Emma
Loved the eloquence and written format. Where your message speaks for itself in the form of a plan called #6905. Beautifully crafted metaphors as well. Great work, a riveting read. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Corset

5 Months Ago

You got it, if a person makes a plan at least morning noon and night , 365 days a year for six years.. read more
Corset

5 Months Ago

ps..it still wouldn't add up to 6905
your poem is as intriguing as Mata Hari's life .. not to mention its form ;) clever word play ..fun but not necessary for me .. my intellect and imagination are sparked ...but your commentary eludes me .. try as i did ...i can not find significance of 6905 ... if any ;} but i am an old man and out of touch with the generations coming up ;) your poem captured me ..and held me and inspired me to do some research ..so from all those perspectives well done says i! :)
E.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Corset

5 Months Ago

:) it's just a number that comes before 6906 and after 6904 and has no significance whatsoever. Than.. read more
There is an erotic richness about this that goes beyond the subject or even the intentional form. It is an excellent write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Corset

5 Months Ago

Thank you Ken! :)
Véry elegant write. Politic and sexy and very creative . Well done.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Corset

5 Months Ago

Thank you Broken English

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