Fine Now

Everytime you walk away I'm left breathless

and gasping for your breath.

A hole opens in my chest that feels as though

it may never close.

You are the blood in my veins and the air

in my lungs.

With you the darkest night is alight with you

splashed though my dreams.

Everytime we kiss my heart stops; nothing

matching the power it weilds.

Your embrace is all I need in this world

to keep me safe.

The way you look at me at times tells me

how much you care.

Your love for me is written in expressions that

pass upon your face.

No words need be said I completely understand

now.

There's no need love for concerned glances

I'm fine now.

Reviews

[Bee]

great imagery! definitely filled with emotion. I like this poem a lot.. and how you compared him to air and blood. well-written.

[Phoenix]

There's a lot of feeling packed into this, I like it.