Inside of an apple is where I live

Inside of an apple is where I live

A Poem by Cosmic kid

Inside of an apple is where I am happy 
There are water towers
Trees growing sappy
And Neon flowers.

There are two boys that take care of me
Just us three
Drinking tea

I wish so badly to go back to the marmoset 
But I need to be strong
So much regret
So wrong

My world is changing
And so is yours
Glares are exchanging
So many open doors

I need help

© 2012 Cosmic kid

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I like it, though I'm partially not sure what to think of this. lol.

Posted 5 Years Ago

It kinda gives me an Alice in Wonderland sort-of-feeling. Very imaginative!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Cosmic kid

6 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Very abstract, but I love it and the subtle metaphor that is its base.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Cosmic kid

6 Years Ago

Thank you
This is a happy but also sad poem, and both emotions are well expressed. Good job, I liked the rhyme and the loose form of this poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago

short but meaningful ...good job

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on July 22, 2012
Last Updated on July 22, 2012
Tags: Happy, apple, flowers, tree, change, doors


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