Mind Of A Zombie

I am a living Zombie
My mind was never mine
My heart is cold, I do what I'm told
I follow directions with no questions
I follow trends with no end
I go to work I have no friends
I am married and my wife hates me
I watch movies and clip coupons
I buy groceries and even tampons
I am not alive I am dead
I am a Zombie till the end

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

very expressive, I like it, it's kinda like how people feel these day's. Awesome.

[Emily Quinn]

hmmm.... very true statement. its kind of sad but that's the day to day life the mass majority lives in. we can no longer think for ourselves and we are no longer individuals. good message

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Hey, this is so funny and sad in the sense that you feel loveless in this write .. i do not know if this is the message being passed on in here, but what i concluded out of it is that you're leading a life without love:
"I go to work I have no friends
I am married and my wife hates me"
This hit me .. I know what it is to have no friends, or when you have people to call your own (like family) and you're seen from a bad angle..
I also found the first three lines very well thought and they are amazing!
Greatly done!
P.S .. The picture is quite familiar .. is it Resident Evil?? =?

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow. Interesting piece. I really like how you wrote it, nice work!!!

Heather

[Kimberly Smith]

mmmmm so many things lol..funny , emotional,sad everything but I loved it..great written ..nicely done keep it up.

[Lauren Beth]

Funny...but also pretty sad. You don't want to go through life feeling like a zombie! Good write though :)

[Kelley]

how sad... I feel for ya buddy.
I have been there before myself.
great write with all the right expression.

thanks for sharing.
Kelley

[C. Harter Amos]

The day-to-day grind of life can make you feel like a zombie if it doesn't turn you into one. Good discription of modern day life and a very clear image of how far away we've traveled from what life should be like.

[Luna]

Very well said.
This was really great. It was so simple, but so wonderfully written.
It has great imagery too.
Nicely penned.

-Luna