You Broke Her Heart

You Broke Her Heart

A Poem by Cool Girl
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Well, this is crappy XD

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My love, this poem I write to you,
Though this poem is not a love poem.

I know you, my love, to be kind and sincere.
I know you to be someone caring and near.

And yet with every careful word
And with your perfect tone,
You broke her heart.

My love, I know it had to be.
But why does this sadden me?

I do not understand.

I suppose I simply am
Too familiar with being broken.

And so it pains me
To see her this way, too.


© 2016 Cool Girl



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This is amazing..

You write very well.



Posted 1 Year Ago


Cool Girl

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much!
Empathy suits you. This is a powerful poem which speaks to your nature as a human being. Great writing, Cool Girl!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cool Girl

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I appreciate your reviews, I hope you know that :)
WittyWonka

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome! I am happy to hear this :)
Sad,
But it was really good,
Is this a true story?
It was heart felt and I can understand.

Your friend,
C. Lee Battaglia


Posted 1 Year Ago


Cool Girl

1 Year Ago

Yes this is a true story. Thanks for reviewing, dearest friend :)
C. Lee Battaglia

1 Year Ago

I sorry.......
Cool Girl

1 Year Ago

It's alright :)
This one really speaks to me.
Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cool Girl

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. :)
it means you have strong feelings toward others ! and you can see your self in that situation

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cool Girl

1 Year Ago

Haha maybe! Thanks for reading, wordman!
 wordman

1 Year Ago

my pleasure !

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Added on March 24, 2016
Last Updated on March 24, 2016
Tags: Love, sadness, poetry

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Cool Girl
Cool Girl

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