take me

take me

A Poem by Pandy

dedicated to my girlfriend again

take me
to your room
and grab a knife
end my life
then with strife
fill me with wine
and get drunk
off of my insides
bring your friends
and party all night
serve my body
as a feast
for them all

© 2017 Pandy

Author's Note

Lacking punctation and capitilization for the mood of the poem.

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This really captures the despair of being in some relationships and resonated with me. Lovely piece.

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Thank you! I'm glad the meaning came through well and that you enjoy it.

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Added on July 16, 2017
Last Updated on July 16, 2017
Tags: depression, anxiety




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