Survivors

 

We have to be strong when we cry painful

Because we got to for our peers

 Be mighty and survive through all our pain

We have to even shine in the pouring rain

Then we climb to the mountain top

So we have so much strength we can’t stop

This is to say all the survivors can be brave

Then you are on to the next stage

Which is to do the same every day?

Then strength will always come our way 

Reviews

[Cynthia]

such a beautiful poem here!

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. em said it so beautifully ... and paul too ...

you are so bright
such a bright light
that darkness would be scared of you

you are so brave
oh how you save
with poetic words so absolutely true

you feel the pain
of all who feel strain
and you rescue them from feeling blue

you are so wise
oh how you surmise
and tell people the real truth

you are a champion
with your soul you stun
you are awesome, lovable and new

your love and care
and courage so rare
make you one of the very special few

. for me ... sweetheart ... this is the best poem you ever wrote ... till now ... i am so proud of you for shining the light of your words, of your courage, of your wisdom, of your spirit ... on our lives ... our lives would be dark without you ... we're very lucky because we have you in our lives ... thank you, so much, sunny boy, for being so special and so you ... loads of love to you ...

[paul]

excellent advice. inspirational too

[em]

- oh wow!!! - this is a poem that will heal so many who are in pain!! - your words and wisdom shine for everyone who needs strength, a gentle nudge, a word of courage, an evidence of bravery - here you are - showing the path - leading the way - to everyone who has been through a tough time - by being a courageous warrior - you are - a real hero, dale - you're just amazing!! -