My Rainbow

These ups,
These downs,
They tear me apart.

You smile,
Then frown.
What's wrong with your heart?

Please don't let
Yourself fall.
I promise that I won't forget.

I don't understand
You at all.
But neither of us regret.

You love me,
Then hate me.
Why is it always same?

I can't explain
Where you take me.
I'm so in love with this pain.

You're like a rainbow
Of emotions and personalities.
So unique, and I won't stop loving you.

And even though
You can't make up your mind,
I'm pretty sure this love is true.

Reviews

[r]

pretty close to what i was looking for in my contest........ its a nice poem.... good luck

[Nathan Durham]

This is a good write. I like the form in which this is written and I like the way you express your feelings. I enjoyed reading this, and plan to read more of your works in the future.