Friendship Lost In

Friendship Lost In

A Poem by Chandra.HEntertainment
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A Piece..strongly felt about a great person in my life that has the biggest open heart I have ever met. He will always love you, even if you turn around & insult him, he will always have that LOVE..

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"So those of you who can't be true...turn away cause I don't value you, but in the end...you will see that your vengeful hearts will be the end of you, your thoughts are twisted, evil when wicked....I feel bad for you with all of your judgment........cause your heart is filled with nothin...i hope one day you can stand up and say....that he was a friend true and true that left like the wind, but returned with the power in the midst of so many doubters...so turn around and leave them be.....cause you don't value thee...don't be surprised when he WINS THE Good Fight, but true to form....he will continue to do you no HARM...cause he has the gift of true LOVE towards others and though I do NOT share his gift...innocent in nature but stings like bee..don't be fooled by my beautiful smile, my flirtatious wit and dancing like style, cause in the End, I will always have....a wonderful friend for years to come regardless of what..... he has DONE."       -Chandra Healy 

© 2013 Chandra.HEntertainment



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Chandra.HEntertainment
Please don't be too cruel...My work is usually not in a slang like manner, but I was feeling a bit sassy today.....But, I love to learn as much as can, please review with an open heart and have respect for the art.....Constructive Criticism!

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I liked and loved this piece but as you need criticism then i just wanna say only one thing, the thing is "TRY WRITING POETRY'S IN STANZA'S RATHER THAN IN SUMMARY'S", that's it. If you do follow my words, you'll touch the sky very soon... you've a talent of writing, i've seen though... you have to know more about this ...meant "How to write" . you know very well how to write but you don't know how to write...(i hope ya got what i wanna say)... !

Now come to the review...
i loved the theme, the concept and your idea to write. Beautiful thoughts.
Keep write some more stuffs, i'd love to read youse more.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chandra.HEntertainment

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate any help I can receive, I agree with you that we need to hear the t.. read more
Chandra.HEntertainment

4 Years Ago

Thanks Sanya



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excellent piece....keep it up :) x

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it it has so many feelings and emotions

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Chandra.HEntertainment

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much Enchanted Raven...you brought a smile to my face. Been hectic with my move rece.. read more
sanya

4 Years Ago

enchanted raven?????????
I liked and loved this piece but as you need criticism then i just wanna say only one thing, the thing is "TRY WRITING POETRY'S IN STANZA'S RATHER THAN IN SUMMARY'S", that's it. If you do follow my words, you'll touch the sky very soon... you've a talent of writing, i've seen though... you have to know more about this ...meant "How to write" . you know very well how to write but you don't know how to write...(i hope ya got what i wanna say)... !

Now come to the review...
i loved the theme, the concept and your idea to write. Beautiful thoughts.
Keep write some more stuffs, i'd love to read youse more.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chandra.HEntertainment

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate any help I can receive, I agree with you that we need to hear the t.. read more
Chandra.HEntertainment

4 Years Ago

Thanks Sanya
I appreciate your love and respect for the person.
Good efforts.
Keep writing more and read writes and reviews of others.
Your confidence will grow over time.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chandra.HEntertainment

4 Years Ago

thank you Zainul, that makes me feel very good. I will for sure...I appreciate the kind words...Che.. read more
zainul

4 Years Ago

You are most welcome,dear writer.
Would you tell me what's the meaning of 'Chandra', part of y.. read more
Chandra.HEntertainment

4 Years Ago

Hello, yes my mother was very spiritual and basically a hippy. It is a name that I believe is predo.. read more

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