Reveries Of Moonlit Memories

Reveries Of Moonlit Memories

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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Ode to a song for the ages

"
Heartstring Plucker


Twilight Time…a song
That matters…especially 
Sung… by the Platters

© 2018 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
Hey! I could have written about rap!

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The Platters were one of the first African-American groups to be accepted as a major chart group and were, for a period of time, the most successful vocal group in the world. Great Senryu tribute :-)
Note: second stanza has 8 syllables - should it not be 7? As a suggestion - drop the word 'when' and it all gels nicely ... bless

Posted 6 Years Ago


David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

6 Years Ago

Thanks much O Fee: firstly for giving me some of your time and secondly for calling my boo boo to my.. read more

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Added on January 10, 2018
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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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