Reveries Of Moonlit Memories
A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
Ode to a song for the ages
Heartstring Plucker
Twilight Time…a song That matters…especially Sung… by the Platters
© 2018 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
Author's Note
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Hey! I could have written about rap!
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Reviews
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The Platters were one of the first African-American groups to be accepted as a major chart group and were, for a period of time, the most successful vocal group in the world. Great Senryu tribute :-)
Note: second stanza has 8 syllables - should it not be 7? As a suggestion - drop the word 'when' and it all gels nicely ... bless
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks much O Fee: firstly for giving me some of your time and secondly for calling my boo boo to my.. read moreThanks much O Fee: firstly for giving me some of your time and secondly for calling my boo boo to my attention. I did exactly what you suggested and am glad you noticed it. I'm getting bit careless of late.
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Added on January 10, 2018
Last Updated on January 15, 2018
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David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)Las Vegas, NV
About
Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..
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