Late night

A night out on the town with a twist

fresh smoke smell

cigarette butt  constellation

out too late giggles and gasps

piercings and tattoos spell out pre-marital sex

pills popped, acid dropped, politics mocked

irreverence  smiles, anarchy's gun's cocked

derision and rebellion  in the veins of unlikely suspects

late night dropping their masks

mocking smirk celebration

stale smoke smell

death knell

they all fell down

last night on the town

Reviews

[B MacGregor]

I had a very similar night with Humpty Dumpty once. It wasn't pretty. he never quite recovered from it all. I think it was the acid.

Quite the coverage on sin, all sorts. Disturbing verbal imagery, but striking.

Gratuitous.

[Marie Harrison]

Sounds like fun!

[LeeLee Ryder]

Cig butt constellation .. What a wonderful image of late night antics ... pill pop, acid drop, and rebel-ry definitely lead to political mockery and anarchists cocked, ready & loaded for rebellion ... Good late night viewing, ARC ...

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... wow ... many, many twists and turns ... quite an eventful night out ... must have been an unforgettable experience ... nice verse ... :) ...