Ghost

It's about Ghost

The rain is hitting hard on the roof, my heart is beating along with it pitapata a smoothing rhythm which made my body ease and flex, the weight on my shoulders lightened,tears slowly rained down from my eyes as you pressed my picture hard against our chest.

You slowly eased back on the bed and closed your eyes, you're wearing your favorite red dress the dress you wore on our first date,i could see your body quiver with anguish. My heart cracked as if it was hit by an earthquake, reaching with my left hand to feel it's cracking beat i called out your name but you didn't hear me,

I sat next to you and stroked your hair, but you couldn't feel the warmth of my hand. Yes you couldn't hear me or feel my worm touch because i was taken from the physical word and put into the spirit world by a low life vagrant, i still remember the day my life the physical world ended it was a summer night we were on our home from dinner when the vagrant jumped out of no way and pulled out his gun in a blink on eye he pulled the trigger which took me away from you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is very deep, emotional and quite moving.
Really quite romantic but at the same time heartbreaking and sad.
You really put some thought into this piece it shows.
Great write :)

[Alex Boyd]

That's deep and the metaphors that you use is simply but powerful. I must admit the context is also endowing meaning opening my mind to new thoughts of love.