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Part Me

Part Me

A Poem by Moonflower



You don't see me
Electric lights blink
eyeballs in a cave
and your head turns

round and round

A swivel on the staircase
you're bringing me down
like the sky, you're alone
All open heart.ed
while I stay contained

They said Time was a rule
A clock watchtower in the
background
Disregarding all those
beats of the heart

There's blood 
in your veins
It's not red, it's blue
But the oxygen 
is turning us a different hue

It's a long way out
through stars and trees
Rustle like the wind is there
but you don't care and 
No one ever said you would..

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© 2013 Moonflower



Author's Note

Moonflower
Whimper in the Darkness

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Wow, so intense, really good!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonflower

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it.
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LG2
Quite intense but I like the mixture you have put in

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonflower

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
This is haunting and a little depressing. But its well written.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Moonflower

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review
There is such darkness in this light...liberation and yet suffocation ♥

Posted 4 Years Ago


Moonflower

4 Years Ago

Thank you for a lovely review(:
far too involved for how tired I am...welcome back..I shall return and re-review this


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

4 Years Ago

you gave me a video editing Idea
Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

4 Years Ago

thank you for that
Moonflower

4 Years Ago

Hah! You're welcome

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Moonflower
Moonflower

Louisville, KY



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