Recreation

We felt the Moonlight
on our skin
We danced,
around
The firelight

As our hands, Our fingers
Brushed
The Heavens
A feather light
embrace

And Our Love
gave birth to a trillion stars

Reviews

[barricade]

this is beautiful...the imagery is gorgeous. I love it!

[Pax Analog]

Beautiful evocation of "as above, so below." We are stardust, golden, and the ineffable power of Love links and illumines all beings, all worlds, all dimensions.

[Alessander]

dig the last two lines, "and our love gave birth to a trillion stars" - sounds almost mythical.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. The lines were strong and create vision of love and a paradise. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Norma M Sutton]

Short and very sweet :)

[Clockwork]

I like the lines "And Our Love/ gave birth to a trillion stars." I think that it is a fresh thought that does not carry the burden of too many beaten cliches. I think it insinuates both a physical creation and a universal level of creation which is really nice. With that said, I think the emotional energy of the poem crests there and the last two lines are not necessary. Those lines about the stars suggest creation and possible act as a double entendre which depicts a sexual climax. Therefore, we already know that you want to die in your lovers arms and that the speaker in the poem has, in some way, already done that.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is beautiful and passionate work.
Warmed my heart. This is the feeling we
all dream of.