I child only for a day more ?????!

A plain verse composition about the thoughts that strike you before your 13th B'Day

Today I realised
I am a child for a day more ,
I won't be able to demand a balloon
I won't be able to demand a lollypop
I won't be able to ask someone to lift me
I will soon not able to do this anymore !..

Today I realised
I am a child for a for a day more ,
People will laugh if I watch cartoon
People will laugh if I write kiddy poems
People will laugh if I scribble characters
I won't do this henceforth !....

Today I realised
I am a child for a day more,
I know I won't be able to wear those frocks
I know I won't be able to laugh out loud
I know I won't be spared if break anything
I know shortly I won't be a tiny spore

Today I realised
For the outside world,
I may a child for a day more
But for my parents and near ones ,
I will be the same fore sure

Today I realised
Soon I may not be a child for all
And not care about what they wish
But I'll behave as my near ones want
As ,for them I'll always be their sweet little doll...

Author's Note

Any review related to my work is always acknowledged ...Thankyou for it a reading

Reviews

[Sofia]

Fantastic! Its quite relatable for me as I 'm 13 years old currently but yeah as Sonakshi di said we can always do these even after we turn 13. I just love the last line. Pls don't mind but I guess there should be a little alteration in the 6th line. I guess it should be - " I will soon not be able to do this anymore"
Hope you don't mind me pointing out that error, but the poem was very well written :)

[Dits]

Thanks a lot Sofia for giving it a reading ....And dear I don't mind constructive corrections ...Thanks once again

[Sofia]

My pleasure :)

[Dits]

Sure thx .. Sonakshi ....Can u suggest me some good tittle?

[Sonakshi Arora]

This was a lovely Write! The last two lines were impressive. But don't worry you can do all this when you turn 13🤣😂
The title of the poem sounds a bit off, just alter it a bit and it'll be fine
Thanks for sharing!