The Imperfect Prison

A Book by Domenic Luciani

Trying out short chapters, hopefully that will narrow down edits.

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© 2010 Domenic Luciani

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WriderParker

I love it! haha I think its so funny that in books and in movies the poison doesn't take effect until after the murderer says something about it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Frantzuu

stunning write :D

Posted 14 Years Ago

Dutch Jr.

Definitely an attention grabber, and I look forward to reading more. Your description is really good, too.

Posted 14 Years Ago

James Watts

“What!? (you are too good a writer for this. It's either a question mark or exclamation, but never both.)

Not a bad start. And it does capture the reader, which as writers that is our goal. Nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Tanece Brooks

Wow. I could picture everything that was happening, almost like a movie to tell you the truth. This is very interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Keep up the good work!

Posted 14 Years Ago

The Analog Kid

Interesting. Nice description. Good to use of third person.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on April 24, 2010
Last Updated on April 25, 2010

Author

Domenic Luciani

Buffalo, NY

About

That is my real name, and that is really me in the picture. Like Patrick says, I'm not in the witness protection program. I mostly write books and stories. I like fantasy, or fiction, but if.. more..