The Unmusing

The Unmusing

A Poem by Cerebriation
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AP Written for a poetry contest. The prompt was "The Taming of the Muse" Edit: This received an honorable mention in the previously mentioned contest.

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I've no need to tame the muse.
It's long been done, you see. 
And since she turned domestic
She's of no use to me.

Submission is discoloration
Obedience is bleakness
Docility is suffocation
Tranquility is weakness

Devilishness makes the muse
That's how it has to be
So now since I made her slavish
All such musing ceased to be

© 2016 Cerebriation


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Cerebriation
2016

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It is a tragi-comedy C.I.
The muse which we need - yes we need - can feel as if they've changed to an extent that we can no longer call on her but maybe it's us who have changed too much and desire a new source of inspiration to suit our new wants.
Then again perhaps they have changed in anticipation of our our own changes - we have yet to catch up.
Loved the thought of the domesticated muse. Loved the phrase 'unmusing' (a bit Disneyish a la Merry Unbirthday song but it made me raise an eyebrow of appreciation).

A good write overall and original. Not surprised it won accolades.
Happy 2017 C.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cerebriation

7 Years Ago

It only got an honorable mention. The contest was rigged. I blame Russia.
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I concur
*shakes fist towards Moscow* "Damn you Puuuuuuuutin !!"



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It is a tragi-comedy C.I.
The muse which we need - yes we need - can feel as if they've changed to an extent that we can no longer call on her but maybe it's us who have changed too much and desire a new source of inspiration to suit our new wants.
Then again perhaps they have changed in anticipation of our our own changes - we have yet to catch up.
Loved the thought of the domesticated muse. Loved the phrase 'unmusing' (a bit Disneyish a la Merry Unbirthday song but it made me raise an eyebrow of appreciation).

A good write overall and original. Not surprised it won accolades.
Happy 2017 C.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cerebriation

7 Years Ago

It only got an honorable mention. The contest was rigged. I blame Russia.
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I concur
*shakes fist towards Moscow* "Damn you Puuuuuuuutin !!"

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Added on December 27, 2016
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Cerebriation
Cerebriation

Aiken, SC



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