True

True

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written in 7th grade. (Either that or 6th. I'm not entirely sure.)

"

I'm stuck in the past,

trying to get back

to where I really am,

but getting more

lost in thoughts of you,

this I know is true.

 

I'm wishing that I'm dreaming

but I'm dreaming what I'm

wishing was really true.

I won't lie to you,

I'm still lost in dreams of you,

yeah, it's true.

 

Well it's tearing me apart,

but I know deep in my heart,

you're the only reason I pull through.

Sometimes it's hard to explain,

but all our tears and all our pain,

keep us true.

 

Yeah, you stare at me

with blue eyes that just

melt away my heart,

then I get back

lost in the pain of you,

wish it wasn't true.

 

I feel the pain so badly,

but I know I can't just

let right go of you.

Let's just face the truth,

that would hurt too true,

'cause it's you.

 

Well it's tearing me apart,

but I know deep in my heart,

you're the only reason I pull through.

Sometimes it's hard to explain,

but all our tears and all our pain,

keep us true.

 

Oh, it's tearing me apart,

but I know deep in my heart -

(You're the only reason I pull through)

You're the only reason.

Well, sometimes it's hard to explain,

but all our tears and all our pain

keep us true.

 

Keep us true

(Keep us true)

This I know is true.

© 2010 Breezie Kae


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This.... is sweet Breezie. Really really sweet.

I can really really related to your first two lines:

"I'm stuck in the past/trying to get back." That is like my life. lol

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Posted 16 Years Ago


i liked this a lot. i love reading lyrics, but a lot of times when i do i can't always imagine a melody to match. but with this song i could hear it in a lot of different ways.
good work.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"...all our tears and all our pain Keep us true." Very nice line.

Amber

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Posted 17 Years Ago


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Rei
wow this was really powerful! This flowed real nicely and I loved the fact that I could relate which is a great compliment when you can reach your readers. But this was quite beautiful with a hint of desperation. Good job!

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