FLAHERTY

A little remenisce

 

FLAHERTY

 

Flaherty, where you been so long ?

You promised me a sing

Then you hit the big smazoo

Promises are such an easy thing

 

Flaherty, you were once my gal

Your name will always ring

From here to Kalamazoo

I just love what you do,  Za Sing !

 

Flaherty,  you been gone so long

Just a little flip and ping

I hear you in the wind

You are still my morning song

 

Flaherty, down Limerick way

Your red hair flies among the rows

Flaherty, you keep calling me

I will never forget your big red nose

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

this brought such a large smile on my face.. as your writing tends to do.

I hear you in the wind
You are still my morning song

that is my favourite bit.. it is filled with soft longing and even that gentle sort of almost cheerful "i loved you, and i am happy for that even tho you are gone" that comes from time to time when enough distance has passed since the leaving..

[Liza]

lol, this was comical
are we talking about flattery?
pleasant words without follow thru of the devoted words without affection?
we end up like clowns don't we - when it all comes down to mere flattery...

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

LOL, how wonderful, delightful and sing-songy. Beautiful, you actually made me laugh. My daughter wanted to know what was so funny, however, at the age of four I really do not think she would understand. A Great job, a great, heartwarming piece. LOVED it!!!!

[Eagle Cruagh]

My apologies to the Flaherty`s, a
great clan.

[nostal]

WOWZERS

[Judy Ponceby]

LOL Wonderfully fun. Love the "Za Sing! :)

[Greg the Bard]

The ending is worth the beginning. I like it a lot. Really great fun.

[Norma M Sutton]

Interesting to read. Made me smile.

[Ellen Hammond]

I find this a funny little ditty that made me laugh. It is penned so well with great rhyme and flow. Love the ending. LOL

[closed account]

this was cute sad and wity!!
you have a classy way of writing
going to read more of your work!!