Gone

Gone

A Poem by E Hartfallow

'Twas the end of my life
when I saw your face 
Youthful, unblemished yet eyes of great age
Leaning into your strong embrace, 
I was finally safe

You took my darkness, my pain, my woe
With you, I could be who I am
And let the memories of my past go
For once, I felt happy again

'Twas the end of my life when you turned and fled
from my heart, from my head
I think of you lying in bed,
my bleeding wrists, raw and red 

Now I am alone again
Cold, frightened, alone
Just as I was, those years ago
Even when you say "Hello", from my heart you will go
tucked away into my dreams,
hidden with the monsters writhing under the stairs
my time with you, my love, are now my nightmares 

Because you're gone.

© 2017 E Hartfallow



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E Hartfallow
I've never written a poem before...

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You have written a very good one now I see no problems with it in any shape or form. It reads really good It has a story to tell and it tells it very well.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For never having written a poem before, this is very good. 96/100

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You made a very beautiful poem..and very meaningful. I felt pain in my veins, and sadness.
I saved it in my favorites...
I wish I could give 200/100, but I can't.
So, 100/100.


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

E Hartfallow

6 Months Ago

Thank-you for your kind words!
You have really expressed your emotions very well. I could feel them. It was heart touching poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

E Hartfallow

6 Months Ago

Thank-you, that was the intention. :)
Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺

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E Hartfallow
E Hartfallow

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Hi! My name is E. Hartfallow and I have been interesting in writing and creating stories from a young age. My friend and I used to write stories together in school and we are still doing so even no.. more..

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