Poem

Say anything you like

We''l go any place you want

A landscape that's floating

a blind diseappears in the distance

I want just your love for me

we'll go any place you want

every moment you bounce around

a tear leaves, a tear leeves from your petal

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Reading this, I felt a desperation. One that begins when we sense an ending of things. Then begins the bargaining...anything you want...anywhere you say. I totally love this authentic write.

[Effector Prime]

You nailed it Divya.

[DIVYA]

Been through it, so its well understood Effector.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

i was into the imagery but the word placement and random articles kind of broke the flow. I would love to see this again but burnished.

[Effector Prime]

I know... But it wouldn't flow for long It died