Poem

Poem

A Poem by Effector Prime

Say anything you like
We''l go any place you want
A landscape that's floating
a blind diseappears in the distance
I want just your love for me
we'll go any place you want
every moment you bounce around
a tear leaves, a tear leeves from your petal

© 2016 Effector Prime



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Reading this, I felt a desperation. One that begins when we sense an ending of things. Then begins the bargaining...anything you want...anywhere you say. I totally love this authentic write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

You nailed it Divya.
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

Been through it, so its well understood Effector.
i was into the imagery but the word placement and random articles kind of broke the flow. I would love to see this again but burnished.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

I know... But it wouldn't flow for long It died

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Added on October 24, 2016
Last Updated on October 24, 2016

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Effector Prime
Effector Prime

Glasgow, Theta-Religion, United Kingdom



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