So we meet again

This is a Tanka

A familiar face

Seen from across the dim room

Smile filled with warmth

Slowly I pass where you are

Eyes meet and you say hello

Reviews

[Eileenws]

You do a good job of conveying this happy reunion. Good job.
P. S. My parents named me Eileen Mary. Mary was my mother's name so I went by Eileen,unless I was in trouble. Always like meeting another Eileen. You did well in the contest. Congrats.

[EileenMarie]

Thanks so much Eileen!

[Levi Levin]

Great work on a simple and effective piece!

[Gee]

A butterflies in the stomach moment and thoughts of " if only"
Was never find enough of any of my exes to feel this way :))
Happy New Year Eileen M

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Eileen puts me in mind of an encounter I had with my childhood sweetheart 25 yrs after last seeing her

[EileenMarie]

Thank you Tate!

[lessa (kenzie)]

This is so wonderful, and beautiful

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!!

[KCthelastboyscout]

I wish you had more to say what this story but it was nicely writren. If this is a lost love, it's easy to flash smiles to each other but at the same time you should flash back to what separated you in the first place. Maybe it's worth taking a new journey together

[EileenMarie]

It was a brief reunion. The beginning as I wrote was the best part :) Thanks for the review!!

[Nessly]

You describe a most wonderful reunion. Great job!

-V

[NeiL ArandA]

I really like this . Just the simplicity of that familiar encounter paints a thousand words . I love Tanka

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!

[Mz]

Short, simple and beautiful - my three favorites.
Good job. :)

[EileenMarie]

Thanks so much!

[SyberRose]

Lovely tanka Eileen...enjoyed your words...loved the title too.

~SyberRose

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I had fun writing this style!