My mad song

She appears-that is clear:
You will have to cry and laugh,
And untamed teasing wildness
Makes you really hate and love!

She is really mad!
Bad girl in your bed.

You hear her name as a Storm .
Intensions to stop her are wrong.

She can rise and put you down,
Than allow to fly above,
And the wish of every man is
To be `killed` by her Love!

She is really mad!
Bad girl in your bed.
 

Reviews

[Moscownight]

By the way I am a virgin and I had fun wrighting this poem:)
And do you know how to add a picture for the poem now and you will see I am so bad there :p

[deleted]

Very intriguing! I like this piece. It has a bad girl feel to it. As if the man is wanting a bad girl in bed. The kind you can have fun with but can't take home to mother. It was well written and structured quite nicely! Well done! Keep exercising your gift!

[Jae]

this is pretty awsome. Bravo bravo to you.

~Rem

[R.D.Scott]

I love this piece, such a feel of conflict and confusion. I think everyone has felt like this about one person at some point in their life.