Phoenix

Phoenix

A Poem by frnd

Love is a phoenix.

It always starts from the ashes of

One that has fallen, died, burned.

Winds lightly swirl the ashes,

Tentatively asking for more,

            A new beginning,

                       Another chance.

Another flame is formed,

Strong in its quick intensity,

Passionate,

             For it knows it must die again.


© 2009 frnd



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Excellent poem!! Slightly depressing due to the sentiment that love can never last, but well penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Love doesn't always have to die.
It does feel that way some times
doesn't it?

Your feeling were felt.

Kelley

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked the way you used the mythology to describe the fleeting aspect of passion and the way people discover new love.

I used mythology to write a princess fairy tale. Please give it a read!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Captivating and depressing all in one. I like the descriptive words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It isn't really a love poem. It's kinda mocking love in a way because from my experience, "love" doesn't last. At least not love that is for physical things.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ARGH *___*
you have me hypnotized, mesmerized
i hate love poems
but i love this one

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am looking for a way to express what I feel; I need some kind of a way to be free of all that cluters my mind. For this I turn to writing as well as reading. I love to be outside and find the beauty.. more..

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