Stronger

Stronger

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

So, I've been cut

I've been burned.

That has made me stronger.

I've been sick

I've tasted smoke

And smelled them as well.

I am still stonger yet.

I have not backed down

Nor have I given up

Though I beg to at times.

 


© 2009 I Am Svetlana



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I LOVE THIS!!
remembers me of myself

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short but strong!
Great poem!
I loved it!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Great poem,
It has a Good structure! I really liked it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really liked this one as well. It perfectly conveyed a struggle in life... And how you get so broken down that you have to beg...Great poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short and sweet
Just as the girls like it

Posted 8 Years Ago



this is a strong piece, it is a survivor story. One question though-the one line where you say you tasted smoke and smelled them as well....why is smoke described as a "them"? Wouldn't it be an "it"? keep writing, keep growing. Good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is good. I am glad you are feeling better as well.

May I make one suggestion though? On the lines:
"Nor have I given up
Though I beg at times"
I would suggest rearranging them to:
"Though I beg at times
I have never given up"
Of course I beg you not to let me stiffle your creativity, for who am I to impose my veiw upon your artistic flow. I am glad you continue to write and at this moment I have just come up with a new quote with which to explain my life. Wow, you have inspired me yet again!

Cheers!

Posted 8 Years Ago


A phoenix song:) We get burned everyday and each morning we reborn. Things go round and round, dont they!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is great...I can definitely relate.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this. It's a feeling that's so relatable to me, and I love how you've expressed it. These are some powerful words, great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 26 years old. I .. more..

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