Memory cascade

Entry in Albert's cafe writing contest: Whitney craft form

Memories

Of our last kiss

And your eyes

As you held me

Like spring rain

Cascading down

Into the field of my heart

Reviews

[Helena]

Such a beautiful gentle write.....loved it!

Helena

[Jibey]

Wonderful image - works so welll...

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Beautiful!

[deeps]

This is beautiful and wonderful,
very well expressed.