Beauty in my dreams

Chaucerian form

There’s beauty in my dreams
Of golden sun shines
and royal blue streams

On banks of aqua blue
A swan swims and nods, it seems
She’s smiling back at you
There’s beauty in my dreams

Where heartache dare not hide
Nor tears of sorrow dare gleams
In peaceful joy, I reside
There’s beauty in my dreams

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

I really loved the flow of this one.. and anything to do with peaceful dreams is almost always a winner with me. This was both tranquil and freeflowing.. beautifully penned. The colourful description really helps add to your dream.. and for this style and format.. I felt really placed alot of energy true to that peace.. that I felt was profound and the highest ranking I have read in this format for entry! Great work here!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations on winning Ivor's Chaucerian Rondel contest!

[Michael X]

wow, this is imagery set adrift in a magical sense of pondering, it feels like a dream, and transports the reader to a beautiful place of thought, i love the way you captured the idea in such few words,
the details that bring your words to life are a golden touch, truly lovely colors paint this portrait

[BoSweets]

Nice Write. sweet, refreshing and to the point

[Helena]

Beautifully done Empress! From the first line this lovely poem
captured my attention and held it to the last word. Excellent
take on Ivor's contest. ~ Helen

[Jibey]

This poem has poise and elegance... the mood is of serene calm that leaves the heartache behind in the dream's beauty and colour