Severence

Oh silence my pain and tears, beloved

Thy absence is cause for these growing fears
 life without you? Perish the thought of it!

 Embrace me till the trembling disappears

I’m fiercely holding on to all of them
the charms of you that reined my soul in
I made a treasure trove to hold them
And put my heart and soul there within

Oh ache for me, won’t you beloved
I plea of thee, with pains of broken heart
console me with thy warm and tender kiss

Assure me this, before I fall apart

Paint me as joyous, ’pon your canvas wall
who's solid image of us will never fail or fall

 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Paint me as joyous, ’pon your canvas wall
who's solid image of us will never fail or fall


O' what beauty this sonnet beholds ~am lovin' the ending couplet in this, an amazing piece of poetry in both form and content and most enjoyable to read !!


Well DonE!! I say

[Jibey]

Lovely words - a blend of spiritual longing and heartfelt need