Vengeance

Vengeance

A Poem by EverEmma

Darkness fades
Forever has no beauty
Endless 

Words written in blood
Drip down the stem of life
Glimmer in the moonlight

I fly
Into the unforgiving night
Silver beacons rain down on me

A wrinkle in time
Love has no price
Charming malice

Misty daylight
Unknown dreams
Vengeance 


© 2010 EverEmma



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Please be brutally honest but not disrespectful

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ohhh I really like this..its dark but beautifully written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


you are a great writer...this is good

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dark images, deep words. The deep and dark combination. The title invited me to read about: vengeance, while I sensed there's more to it than just that. It goes way in...I'm unable to explain further, but anyway that's how I interpreted this poem. Interesting write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nicely done....just as right percentage of emotions showed, not too much but not also to little..good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good write but I can't relate title to the piece itself

Posted 8 Years Ago


A honest betrayal of the hearts desire to right a wrong Id say

Posted 8 Years Ago


it is very beautiful~Emma~ the metaphors themselves are delicate dabs of hues on your poetic canvas~ for me personally it went into a darker shade of the L'Engle's Wrinkle in Time series pulled out and through into today between the ghostly fingertips of a girl stiching up the past~ beautiful~

Posted 8 Years Ago


I enjoyed this piece! Good write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


very good i really liked it great work i hope to see more when i unblock read requests on my profile


100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


beautiful! simple words by a lot of depth...

Posted 8 Years Ago



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