little droplet of water

I wrote this for a contest. I didn't place in the contest.

this little droplet of water

filled with pretty little flowers

this little tiny world

 

trapped

 

completely un aware of it's fate

completely unaware that eventually

eventually gravity will come

gravity will come and destroy

that little droplet of water

will fall and splash to the ground

 

then the little droplet of water

filled with pretty little flowers

this little tiny world

will be no more

Author's Note

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Reviews

[paparapapa]

This is really interesting. It's amusing how you can think of writing a poem about the fate of a little droplet of water. These are the small things that we tend to overlook. I find this simple but beautiful. Well done. :)