Mystic Nature

An inquiry of others.

The mystic feeling I get in my body,
I wonder if others feel the same.
I wonder If this feeling of spiritual prowess is something they can help explain.
My path has been sprinkled with, visions of spiritual places.
Wide awake I was visiting,
No form of mediation.
Maybe my kundalini was awaken.
Or maybe it was a rapture and I was taken.
This feeling I can't even fake it,
From this ordeal I now take medication.
The power from this thing,
Has given God and I a spiritual conversation.
I mean places so beautiful that my perception of this world , is vacant.
I urge for those places that spiritually were created.
But not the worse ones, because it left my spirit frustrated and shaken.
It was hell I had seen a place most say is forsaken
To be alive and see it,
I wonder what someone would say if,
They had the opportunity to see heaven and hell at the root of their creation.
Call me mad,
Or insane trust me I can relate.
At times I feel that way because no one can explain this mental state.
For this is just a sliver of the power of my faith.
For Love is all I have felt,
Since I have lived since my birth date.
Maybe I'm more than just a wondering soul.
Maybe I am a reincarnated spirit,
From the days of ode.
Ultimately, I'm curious if others felt the same.
So I wouldn't be alone, wondering these things.

Reviews

[Babe Roxx]

Whew! I got lost in deep thoughts lol...I become an airhead after a long day...I Love your poem, Gentil...I take walks at the lake in San Francisco...I love the Fog drapes down low...it's mystical to me...like ghostly figure...like curtains draping the Eucalyptus trees...the smell is minty...the flowers orange...there's a certain mysticism when I take that stroll...lovely write.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the wondering and the mystic nature of this lovely poem...:)...................