‘Silent Skies’

Setting sun on time - rebirth , changing time🌹

‘Silent Skies’

Suns setting
Never forgetting

Promises new
Shared for
Me and you

Colours fading
Thoughts
Ricocheting-

Clouds caressing
Faith it’s
Testing-

Silent
Promises
Never forgetting-

It’s place in time

Change inevitable

Setting on old
Bringing new -

One chapter
At a time

Reds to blue
Different hues-

I see the impression
Of you -
So true

There are many
But
Only few..

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
26 March 2018

Reviews

[Traci]

I see the impression
Of you -
So true

Beautiful throughout the piece, but this is my favorite. I love the imagery, and the association of the sunset.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh I’m so glad you enjoy theses words- sometimes the love you feel can only be expressed in colour- Thankyou dear soul you are so kind🌹

[θεά]

What a nice, lilting meter to a very rejuvenating poem about life, its many hues and the immediacy to not stay stuck in a rut. Beautifully done as always, Kelly. Respect.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou my dearest I’m glad you enjoyed it Thankyou for sharing your thoughts- 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest tone I see the impression
"Of you -
So true
There are many
But
Only few..in the words dear Kelly."
The above lines. Few times can we show real face. Maybe because the real face cannot be found. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I’m glad it stirred the emotions- maybe maybe not we make our own maybes..all true faces can be found if they really want to be - just takes a lifting up of carpet and sweeping clean- thanku again🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

A good cleaning? You are welcome dear Kelly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes- deepest clean 🌹

[Ty]

Colours fading
Thoughts
Ricocheting-

Such a great line.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

THAnkyou well they do at times bouncing from place to place- 🌹

[Lorry]

Glad im not alone in watching the skies whilee pondering life, the universe and our place in it.
When you watch it long enough, you see the subtleties of ever changing colour and perspectives. I half seriously think the sky is a mood ring :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Just beautiful the way the colours change- glad u saw it in the words- no you not alone🌹

[Lorry]

No, but I bet you dont walk into as many lamp posts/ people/ dog leashes etc, as I do. Spend so long looking up in the hope I see a spaceship come to take me back home :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol... not quiet but nearly ...I wonder if they would see us the same as what we see ourselves in mirror or how would we look to them- that’s what I winder???

[Lorry]

Lets jope they dont judge us all the same if they meet trump first. :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol....no comment🙈

[Richard McLin]

This is a piece that can mean many things to many people. I love the part about "I see the Impression of you so true" It's beautiful.
-Richard

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and yes we each see our own thing and have our own thoughts when looking to the sky- I appreciate your time🌹

[Richard McLin]

Of course.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Glad you agree🌹

[Ghost]

The sun setting can bring so many thoughts to life and we as humans must figure out which thoughts to keep and which ones to pass on... Thank you for sharing

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

What a wonderful way of putting it - yes I love watching it set on old chapters starting anew each day- waiting to see what yet another day brings- hopeful and grateful for all- thankyou🌹