‘Stillness Of Silence’

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‘Stillness Of Silence’

In the stillness
And silence
Of
Nothing

Sings the songs
Of every seeking
Souls
Answer

With sounds of
Grief and relief
Of every hearts
Desire

Where fires are set
And put to test
The many tales
Of time

Where unfit gloves
They seek their mate
Then hand the fate
Of time-

In murmurs
And in
Mimes
Unlocked are
Fates
Of time

The key it lies
Within the mind
Entertaining
Nursery rhymes-

We pick and choose
But who’s to lose
Confuse and use
It chooses few
Amongst me
And you

Where truths they lie
And wait

To match and make
To cut the cake
The wake of sleepy
Souls-
Set out to reach
A goal to keep
Within a leap
Of faith-

The gate it stands
Outside your plans
The lock to use
Your key
To set your spirit
Free

In silence you
Find the ‘me’

You set the music
Free..

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
29 April 2018

Reviews

[lightsong]

like a soft real calling, Your words flew, into our minds and into Your lover mind... silence and solitude, where the loudest, truest and most effective sounds lay, where our inner voice waits for us, if only we can really open our hearts, minds and spirits, thank You dear Kelly for keep sharing with us Your beautiful parts.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for receiving and sharing yourself with a loving heart of truth , compassion and live- we only have to look a bit deeper to see all that’s waiting to be found- u are much appreciated🌹

[lightsong]

like a soft real calling, Your words flew, into our minds and into Your lover mind... silence and solitude, where the loudest, truest and most effective sounds lay, where our inner voice waits for us, if only we can really open our hearts, minds and spirits, thank You dear Kelly for keep sharing with us Your beautiful parts.

[words preferred]

Loved the ending and intermittent rhyming. Great poem with powerful words. I enjoyed reading, thanks!!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So glad it brought joy to you- Thankyou for taking time and stopping by- really appreciate it🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really like this...especially the 8th stanza...smooth and cool are you, dear poet.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thanking you- the inspiration cane from a comment a street person made this morning which I heard passing by- and turned to reply with another comment- got me thinking🌹glad you found worth herein🌹

[barleygirl]

As always, I love your wordplay, using many entertaining & thought-provoking combinations of word sounds & rhymes, etc. I totally agree with your message, that silence is a beautiful place where we can release all kinds of wonderment. I think many people cannot stand silence, but it’s great once you learn to love it. Your examples of how a quiet mind invites all sorts of intriguing experiences is well done becuz of your imaginative details (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou like always for your kind words and enjoyment- yes my mind went for a whirl this morning thinking about the meaning of ‘bothing’- a street person was talking to someone saying they like doing nothing so I said well in nothing you learn everything- and then there was this poem- Thankyou for taking time I really appreciate it🌹