Apathetic

Apathetic

A Poem by Faithy
"

Depression is nothing but anger without enthusiasm. - Steven Wright

"

No passion or pleasure
Just duty
You don't want to go
You want out
You can't though
You are into deep
It's choking you as it drags you under
Your own personal poison
You need air and breathe the liquid in
Gagging and thrashing as you slowly black out

Black out life, love, and drive
Just a pointless piece of the puzzle
Just another gear in the machine


© 2010 Faithy



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For such a short poem this has a beautiful flow. I could feel the desire to leave through the text.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Its definitely something we all can relate to. It has a good flow to it. I like this one very much :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


We feel useless and confused in a life. Your words were full of desire to be elsewhere. I like the strength in the poem. We feel lock up and can't escape. Best part if we are wise. You can escape and do what you desire.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 7, 2010
Last Updated on January 11, 2010
Tags: apathetic, nothing, passion, lacking, poison, gear, machine, puzzle, piece

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Faithy

Medina, OH



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