Writer's block

Writer's block

A Poem by FaithfullyJennyBear

Words flowing through my mind,

It all makes perfect sense.

Typing out the sentences

Past or present tense.

Imagining the scenes

As you put the words together

The speed your fingers type

              Then you think about the weather.

 

 You     think      about     your      home.

 

             What you're going to have for dinner.

       You think about the diet

 

                            That's supposed          to make you thinner.

   Then

             you

                     lose

                             track

 

Of the words that were so                        perfect

                          Wondering what to write

The brain you need to disect.

      The small wall in your mind

               Builds up into a block

                                    Stops your imagination

             Makes your ideas worth the mock.

 

I hate it when this happens

I wish I could just write

But hey, i just made a poem..

One that's worth your sight..

© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear


Author's Note

FaithfullyJennyBear
As if I had writer's block and made a poem about it :') I have just proven logic wrong :P x

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I'm suffering writers block right about now :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so true....I hate writers block. Happens to me all the time and I have to take inspirational walks :D
I adore the contradiction of having writers block and writing a poem about it, its awesome :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very kewl write , great flow and feel to it

Posted 12 Years Ago


corny but yet funn! =) I like it! =)


Posted 12 Years Ago


Nicely done!

Writers Block is a ghastly beast...but i think it's mostly a combination of procrastination and laziness:)

Writers need to PUSH through it all....something like what you've done now:)

Nice one!

~M.Babu~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some people life are poetry in action. You create a interesting poem with your thoughts and your actions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This made me smile, I've gone through this countless times, never could word it as well though (^_^)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a great poem, a perfect example of how writers block works, congrats for working through it and pulling off this fantastic piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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FaithfullyJennyBear
FaithfullyJennyBear

England, North east , United Kingdom



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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :) I've also had every colou.. more..

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